Sunday, September 28, 2008

Short Story

our assignment for english was a short story. i liked it so much i'll post it here:

The Glass Needle

The room was white. It seemed to float above the city in a new age skyscraper, one of many glass needles pointed miles up into the faded blue sky. In this one glass needle, the room sat. Flat, modern, and square. The wall furthest east was about 35 feet tall –composed entirely of glass panes looking out over the city. The wall adjacent to that was another wall of windows –this time looking into the lives of the citizens of the city. Another 35 feet of monitors and screens, all filled with innumerable amounts of data and images. Sandwiched in between these two vast expanses of glass, sat the apartment. It was barren and modern. The walls and floors remained empty, unfinished concrete composite. The ceiling had all of the ducting and plumbing exposed, giving the whole room an industrial feel. Hidden in an enclave on the northern wall was the kitchen. The space had all of the bare necessities, plainly visible and utterly utilitarian. Metal and black gloss dominated the room. On the south wall was an ingeniously hidden Murphy bed, and two small openings on either side of the bed where light emitted. In the center of the room was her workspace, along with a makeshift “sitting area” for the rare times she had guests over. Her chair faced the perpetually glowing wall of video feed, allowing her to monitor it with cunning precision. On the left side of the chair was a small pad, with some controls for the video, a small keyboard, and a glowing red button. The red button was the only source of color in the room, other than what she was wearing, and even then, there were only two things in the room with color at all.

They used to say that one’s home reflected one’s lifestyle. Makes sense, and this woman was no exception. The woman who resided in the room wore plain white. She had a bright white, somewhat tight fitting turtleneck encasing her thin frame, with a bright red scarf wrapped around her neck. She was tall, pale and bony, and yet, she had a huge presence. When she walked into a room with another breathing soul in her vision, her ice blue eyes seemed to cut them into a million little pieces. She walked with an eerie grace, sometimes seeming to hover over to her destination without moving. Her name was unimportant. When she was recruited, she lost all sense of individuality. She was part of the machine. Expertly calibrated and scarily precise, the network of the machine let nothing slip by unnoticed. Her shift for the Eye was beginning.

She moved over to the center of the room toward the chair, as the Murphy bed behind her quickly receded into the wall, leaving only a memory of sleep. She sat down on the chair, her weight on the sensors triggering the video wall to flash a message of greeting to the woman. She proceeded to place her left wrist on the port. The computer seized control of her wrist and within seconds, her arm was intertwined with wires, and her veins were connected to the mainframe through a set of small wires peering out of her forearm. She was now under the watch of the Eye, like every other citizen in the city. While she scanned the screens on the massive wall, the wires in her arm bombarded her brain with data on every single person visible in the frames. The scenes on the screens were ghostly –hordes of people going about their daily duties, all strangely synchronized. It wasn’t hard to find the first problem of the day. Somewhere near the city gates, she spotted someone out of sync. The man she saw wasn’t wearing plain beige, and looked terribly confused. The Eye had no data on this man yet –he was so obviously an outsider that did not belong. She pressed the red button without hesitation and watched as seconds later, three men dressed in white armor came to take the man to the tallest glass needle.

Throughout the day, the woman weeded out potential problems throughout the city, along with the Eye network, keeping the city running like a well oiled, blindly obedient, thoughtless machine. Anyone who compelled her to tap the red button was quickly subdued and would be sterilized by authorities to prevent further danger. If they posed too great a threat, they’d never to be seen again. Wiped off the face of the city of glass needles. There she sat, in this chair, intricately wired into the framework of the Eye. She was detached, looking at the video with such a blank stare; any possible onlooker would assume her dead. She didn’t even blink, moving only to let air into her lungs. She was detached because of the red button. Years of tapping it had worn her sympathy and emotion dry. She no longer felt any sort of empathy when pressing the button. She had lost that long ago, and now functioned like a methodical machine, not even thinking, but rather knowing.

She continued with the routine until another abnormality sprouted. This one was different –what looked like a mother and daughter were walking in line with everyone else, but were not supposed to be near the city gates. The data the Eye pulled up on them confirmed her suspicions. She began to wonder, the first time thought had intruded on work in years, why the mother and daughter were heading to the city gates. Could they be trying to escape? Why would they do this when they knew the Eye was watching? She sat there for a moment, not knowing what to do, dumbfounded by the bravery of these two people. Her finger was over the red button, ready to push it, but her conscience forced her not to. The closer the woman and daughter got to the city gates, the more rushed their pace became. She knew the Eye was watching all three of them. The mother, daughter, and herself. She thought of the consequences of her inaction. The woman and daughter began a mad dash to the gates, shoving people aside to get out of their hell. The woman behind the screen held firm, not moving, still in shock. The Eye saw this.

As the woman and daughter were just escaping the gates, five armored guards dressed in white appeared within the room. The woman started to shed a tear, but before it was released to stream down her face, the Eye sent a massive shock through her system from the wires in her forearm. The wires connecting her to the mainframe were shocking her into submission, waiting for the guards to take her. The guards proceeded to take her away, farther up into the glass needle. Her red scarf was torn off in the process, and remained in the room with the button.


Monday, August 4, 2008

Cleveland Calling

Well, today was the second day in Cleveland. Nice city here. It’s not as big as Miami, but the architecture is an incredible mix of old and new. We got into Cleveland yesterday, checked into our hotel, and this morning got up and about. My appointment at CIA was at 10AM, with a meeting with the Dean of faculty at noon. I ended up doing one better for me and meeting with the chair of the Industrial Design department at the school. Let me tell you, that’s pure awesome. We got a campus tour along with that. It’s a small school, and it’s like DASH but up a few levels. 500 or so students, so it’s a very personal setting. (one of the best qualities for a school to possess.) we had lunch in little Italy as per advice from our student tour guide, in a small Italian bakery. I had the Meat Stromboli. Good stuff. The other thing strange about being so far north is the hours of daylight. It gets dark at around 9:15. 9. AT NIGHT. 9. WHAT GIVES? My biological clock is screwing up each time I see the sun at night. I’m told it’s only going to get worse the further north we get. Ah, well. At least I can look forward to tearing through the heartland of America to Columbus, Ohio. We’re going to go there for a night, then head over to Buffalo, and Niagara falls. Also; I need to get the damn camera out more. That shutter button is getting depressed.


Sunday, August 3, 2008

Haulin' on down to Cleveland


Today we hauled the Sebring from Detroit to Cleveland. With the top down. On the interstate. Blasting Satellite radio. Quite fun, except for the sunburn. Ironic, no? I live in Florida and spend all day in the sun and yet, one trip up north with the top down and I’m pink. What gives? Oh, OH. We were delayed in coming to Cleveland. Why? I-75 Southbound was shut down. All of it. And my iPhone kept telling us to get on it, leading us nowhere. Fun times led to fun driving, and before we knew it we were headed to Cleveland. As soon as we pulled into the city we were greeted by the Rock and Roll Hall of Fame. Quite nice architecture, might I add. It was already 3, so it was pointless to pay $22 for two hours of the museum. And they wanted to take my baby from me! They had a mandatory camera check-in. no way in hell am I ever going to do that.

Long story short, we raided the gift shop. I’m not sure whether it’s a good habit or not, but we’re making it one to cruise the downtown area with the top down at night. No muggings yet. And the breeze and temperature is quite nice on cities on the great lakes. Or just up north in general.

Further stories and reporting tomorrow!

next stop? Columbus for a day, then a 6 hour drive to Niagara Falls (the Canadian side, of course)

Saturday, August 2, 2008

We swear! It’s bigger in person!


Today was a good day. We left our awesome Victorian hotel on Ferry Street behind. (pictured to the left) we promptly drove to Dearborn, Michigan to tour the Rouge Factory at Ford and visit the Ford Museum. The Rouge factory would have been nice, seeing as they made it out to be the factory of the future. It would have been awesome if they were actually making something at this “factory of the future”. Alas, all the workers had been laid off since early june because the trucks they were making at the Rouge plant were just not selling. In fact, nothing with four wheels is selling. Right now, this super green gem of the future isn’t even doing anything. It’s just sitting there, taking up space, wasting electricity with the lighting, not even making any gas-guzzling trucks. I’d post a picture of this depressing sight, but cameras are forbidden on the factory floor, as they might capture workers in “compromising positions” as one employee put it. “Especially the female employees, you know, bending over to screw something in… we don’t want them to be photoshopped and up on youtube, you know?”

YEAH, like I’m gonna do that. Who wants to see brawny babes sprawled over an F-150 Chassis with a riveter? You know, on second thought, keep that to yourself.

Next stop was the ford museum. Not just cars, oh, no. planes, trains, cars, furniture. Anything henry himself could get his hands on and put into a museum. Kennedy’s limo? Got it. Original Mustang Mach 1 concept? Got it. The Allegheny? Yup. That’s stuffed into the warehouse too. Quite, quite large in fact. Those of you who know me in person know that I’m no shortie. I’m 6’4.5” and this engine was MASSIVE. The little sister of the Union Pacific “Big Boys”, the Allegheny was still quite massive. Used to haul coal in huge 150+ car trains from the Allegheny mountains to the factories that used them. Huge things. Massive. No other words.

When we left there, we headed over to our hotel (not nearly as nice as the Inn on Ferry Street), there! Over on the left! A mass of old Detroit metal! I must! MUST! Stop to take a few pictures!

Yep, a local car club was meeting. We stopped in with our Sebring and my camera. The cars? Awesome. The pictures? Great. The people? Nice. There was one car that caught my eye –a 1955 Ford Fairlane convertible. In pink. With black trim. Owned by a nice little old lady. In pink. With pink trim.

I got a couple of really nice shots from the trip, and uploaded some to Flickr. here's the link:

[Flickr Photos]

enjoy!

Friday, August 1, 2008

Detroit, MI

And so, our flight on Northwest from Miami with service to Detroit was quite the pleasurable one. See, my seat was supposed to be in the middle seat of a row of three. Luckily for me, and very unluckily for whomever’s seat that was, the window seat next to me was empty. Mid flight I decided that nobody was going to take the said seat, seeing as we were a captive audience with no way in or out of the plane. My camera got the middle seat.

Every flight across the continental U.S. has to have the obligatory crying infant/baby. Our flight was no exception, but in this case, the mother acted swiftly to shut the thing up before any permanent hearing damage was done to any fellow passengers.

We then headed over to avis, to rent a car. Little did we know they only had one or two cars available for long distance drop offs, and none of them was what we ordered. No, in fact, the closest thing they had to our econobox Pontiac was a Chrysler Sebring convertible. Boy, were we lucky. The top was promptly folded and is only up when the car is parked. At all other times it’s blasting satellite radio with the top down.

Now, Detroit is not nearly as bad as you hatemonging naysayers may say. It’s actually quite nice. The people are actually personable (unlike, say, a southern city on the eastern seaboard filled with chic scum)

The only thing I find strange is the language. Soda is “pop”. I ask what kind of sodas they’ve got? They give me the most clueless look. “oh, you mean pop!” and they burst out laughing. Yeah? Pop? Well at least I don’t live in a state shaped like a mitten.

I also visited CCS today for a campus tour and a little portfolio review. From the feedback Sabrina gave me, I’ve got to work on my ellipses, values, and get my technical skill up there with my concepts. Apparently, my ideas actually have substance! Creative essence! They’re not just bullshit drawings that look good! Now… to make my ideas look good –on par with those drawings that lack any creativity whatsoever but look stunning. I’ll be trying my best!

We also decided on a whim to visit the Chrysler Museum. Kind of a long drive from Detroit to the Headquarters, but very enjoyable in our convertible. The museum was nice, typical museum complete with some informational videos with the production value of dry toast. (see, Mallory? I can speak film too!) the museum also showcased some very nice concept cars by Chrysler. The 1995 Atlantic was stunning in person. Also; rumble seats. Where have they gone? I want them back!

Next stop? Visiting more museums (on the Ford side of the fence), and then Cleveland.

When I get back to MIA or obtain a suitable upload speed on a network, I’ll upload more pictures.